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The three of us:
on our way to dawn
away from the ones we know
away from the norms

how to exchange smiles?
juggle them among us
throw some to some gorgeous strangers
that one that's oblivious of the world

The distances:
Pasay
Yale
Tarlac

poetry
science
dope

romance... fun... curiosity whatever!

The three of us yesterday
each a person of his own right
yet naive of this experiencing
perhaps better then till now



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The following comments are for "Morning Disgrace"
by rainierthisyear

Confused by Title
Perhaps I'm missing something, but where's the disgrace?

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: November 27, 2004 )





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