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No tears on a night without sleep.
only cold
open eyes.

A hard shell of
past lust,
lovely drugs.

Nightmares without sleep,
a picture in the distance
a burning mind,
a crumbling heart.

Finally it cracks,
a mirror down a broken spine.
A sleep without dreams.
no tears.



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The following comments are for "No tears, on a night without sleep"
by DEMONeyesBLUE

No tears On A Night Without Sleep
I wouldn't have used the words "hard" or "lovely"
but other han that I like this piece. :)

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 27, 2004 )

Sleep without dreams
How sad that must be to not have the escape of dreams. They can some times be ones only comfort.

( Posted by: DrBlack [Member] On: November 28, 2004 )





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