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I lay here alone on this unstable ground
and only see black when i take a look aroiund
This place, so familiar, I've been here before
but its different now, I can't find the door
I glance back to see all that used to be mine
and take a stroll upon the boulevard of time
What used to be, now seems so far away
There's nothing more I can do, nothing I can say
To them I'm just invisible, I guess they'll never see
all the shit I went through, The reason I am me.

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<<-Hillary->>


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