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Lover, dear, of blood-drained dead
Of flesh made sheet, of bone made gel
Of heart made cold, no beat to spill
From open wounds of spear and pellet
Liquid, life. Long gushed and hardened
Dark, upon the tiles
Of abattoir, I know you, love
Yet still I slip in puddle, blood
Come hard to Reaper's crimson cloak
And mourn all death in Death's embrace

The answer to EVERYTHING!!!:- The Cycle.
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The following comments are for "To My Omnivorous Lovers"
by A. Cain

teenage mutant ninja veggies
another vegetarian here :-).

well-written and good use of imagery. Pools of blood are the price of McDonalds.


( Posted by: JonnyT [Member] On: November 25, 2004 )

Metaphor or Commentary?
Actually, until I read Jonathon's comment I hadn't thought to take your title literally. I enjoyed reading this more from that straight-forward perspective. I am curious as to whether that was your intention? Is this a comment on eating meat, a metaphor for something else or both?

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: November 25, 2004 )

Theories Welcome
It is as it proclaims, Hazelfaern, a poem to and about meat-eating partners. It would, though, be amusing to see people wriggling out of the personal relevancy of this piece by digging out a deeper meaning. Lol

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 26, 2004 )

Love it!
I love it. I'd forgotten about the title and was fantasizing about murder in a tiled room.



Well, write one about murder, dammit!

( Posted by: The Alienist [Member] On: November 26, 2004 )

Slaughter is murder in a tiled room Alienist.

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 26, 2004 )


( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 26, 2004 )

And here I thought it was about Christmas!

( Posted by: Viper9 [Member] On: November 27, 2004 )

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