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A/: This is an experiment just to see what happens.

Condemning vascillation
Why must you haunt me?

For all of my days
Keeping delightful waver
As part of my life.

Maybe this- perhaps-
Another thing brings to mind
Tasteless tea or else?

Meanwhile others pass
Amidst quick, graceful movements
Scarcely a side glance

As I drown in thought
Deepness darkness uncreated
Living between worlds.

The conscious shape reality.

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The following comments are for "Indecision"
by Furius

good work
I like this piece and its concept. I didn't like "tasteless tea or else". I mean "tasteless tea" is good but or else? I did like "deepness, darkness uncreated" in the last paragraph.

( Posted by: Seanspacey [Member] On: May 6, 2002 )

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