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(When I wrote/read this I heard/hear the drum beat on every syllable almost like itís the lyrics to a song. Kind of like a mantra)

The beat of the drum


is coming for you
The heartbeat of death


is found in the tune
Its sound is seducing
like a sirenís sweet call
Glory for you
is its promise to all
The Devil whispers
in a rhythmic beat
ďDie for your country
donít question the feat.Ē
Soon you are singing
a tune you donít know
The drum beat has got you
and itís not letting go
You step into to line


with another manís lies
Drink in the violence


and swat the flies
The taste of blood


the smell of flesh
Your soul is gone


soon will the rest
Youíve killed your fill


now its your turn
You die with pride


but you still burn
And all you hear


is a slow pounding drone
The Devil is sitting


with drum and throne
Heís laughing and playing


thereís no where to run
Because everyoneís dancing
to the beat of the drum


------
-Parker-

Every gun that is made, every warship launched, every rocket fired, signifies in the final sense a theft from those who hunger and are not fed, those who are cold and are not clothed.
-Dwight D. Eisenhower


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The following comments are for "WAR DRUM"
by Parker

War Drum
Indeed

(Good quote in your signature btw)

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 25, 2004 )

bang bang, that awful sound
^^^ I agree.

Jonathan.

( Posted by: JonnyT [Member] On: November 25, 2004 )

Engrossing read
and the drum beat is very real. Great job. Thanks for sharing it.

Always,
Char

( Posted by: Char [Member] On: November 26, 2004 )





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