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My mother's laugh is obnoxious.
It's oddly pitched
And I think it sounds funny.
When I was young
I tried not to laugh like her.
Now in my twenties
I discover that I laugh a lot like her.
This depresses me quite a bit
But I know that when I have grown old
And my mother has gone
I will find solace in my laugh
Because it will be her laughing
And I will know that she is still with me
And that she shares all my joys.


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The following comments are for "My Mother's Laugh"
by Persephone

Wonderfully Succinct
Your premise is perfectly rendered, Persephone. A lovely read and a tender thought.

( Posted by: hazelfaern [Member] On: November 24, 2004 )

My Mother's Laugh
*wells up* child/parent bonds, god I think its the most emotive issue.

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 24, 2004 )

Very Nice
Persephone;
I enjoyed this read alot...so many people has their parents laugh as well as their voice...

Be Blessedl,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 24, 2004 )

My Mother's Laugh
Beautiful. It touched my heart. I too am cursed and blessed with my mother's obnoxious, staggered laugh! I hope it will be a long time before it's all I have left to cling to. Thank you for changing my perception.
Peace and Blessings

( Posted by: MoKha [Member] On: September 14, 2005 )





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