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gray haired old woman
looks in mirror-sees wrinkles
they add character

Kacee Huggs

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The following comments are for "It's Just Lil Ole Me"
by Nitz Kitty

And Again
This is great; I read this out loud twice... And a great imagery at that..

Thanks for the read....


( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 24, 2004 )

Jeannie and Chris
Thanks to you both for the great ratings...I don't feel I deserve them but I am thankful...
Jeannie...when I look in the mirror and see wrinkles...I think it is better to be positive than negative...just like saying wine gets better with age...God Bless...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: November 24, 2004 )

i agree with the sentiments in this epigram...however i can't see the last line being a good one for haiku as it's a statement of the obvious rather than an implication.

( Posted by: myron [Member] On: November 29, 2004 )

Thanks for the comment...everyone on who knows me ...will tell you I don't follow any rules...I make them up as I go along...I thought that was what being a poet was all about...I'm just here to have fun...never said I was serious

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: November 29, 2004 )

i don't know who's serious in their writing of poetry or who's being frivolous. my feeling is that if you put your poetry in front of readers you're serious. if you're just writing for yourself, and you don't want to improve, you may as well keep it in your own home...

so thanks for your comments - i'll know how to respond to your poetry in future...i'm new here and struggling to find my way...

i post my poems here in order to get critisism and to learn how to improve. i don't want polite and insincere comments - they are of no use to me.

as for breaking the rules of poetry, i agree with you entirely. but first you must learn what the rules are...

( Posted by: myron [Member] On: November 29, 2004 )

Why learn the rules when I'm not going to follow them anyhow...same result less effort...I write my poems to share because they might bring a smile to someone's face and lighten their hearts...I have nothing against you a matter of fact I'm concerned...If you are too serious about your work your blood pressure might go up...My prayers are with you and may you receive the desires of your heart.

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: November 30, 2004 )

Pithy Kitty...

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: December 29, 2004 )

Kitty Myron
Hmmm...seems like Myron has a point. Liked the haiku, but thought Myron was actually insightful. Why the reaction? Too serious? High blood pressure? Perhaps you need to lighten up as well, and learn from the site.

( Posted by: brad [Member] On: December 29, 2004 )

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