The following comments are for "Acoustic palette – recovered" by City
taking my time
thank you Jessica,
after some of the comments I am not sure this can be called 'haiku' ... but there is no other type I can find for this short threeline writing
I appreciate your comments, and will concentrate more on longer poems
will show them here if they turn out good enough for this audience!
Posted by: City [Member] On: November 29, 2004
Perhaps it shouldn't be called Haiku. That is ok though. Call it Brevity to the max. I like this alot. It takes a brilliant mind to have the readers, read the UNSAID.
Submit them under Poetry, I have seen lots of short forms as this. Very nicely done City.