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I carry
Some kind of sin
Which is in the form
Of a dark secret of mine
One already knows
But what if the others would know
What will they say
For every secret made by man
Can be solved and known
So if they will find it
About my dark secret
Will they see me as a destroyer of life
And will they never talk to me again
How must I deal with that than
Must I never talk about it again
Must I let it all crawl in me
Until I explode
And I will get addicted to it
And what will they than think about me
I do not know, I cannot know
For the tree goddesses of fate
Are always making a new story line for man
For they are life, clotho
Fate, Lachesis and Death, Atropos
And even now
Sometimes I wished the third one Atropos
Came to take me away
For if they knew
Then Im better of dead
Then that they know it
And must I walk an entire life with regret
And shame
Until I cannot take it anymore
And I will take my own life
Maybe Im meant to do so
Taking my own life
And not another
Or something else
There is not a single day
That I think about it
And think about how
They might react
It is already stupid that I think about it
And yet this stupidity grows
Stronger and stronger
And yet sooner that I will explode
And how this

Dark Secret Stays Within


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