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he waves in the hall
or he calls out your name
he hangs by your locker
he's playing the game

he says hes a friend
but tells others he wants more
is he in it for love
or is does he just want to score

do you give him your heart?
but your feelings on the line
it's all so confusing
yet it could turn out fine

are you sure he can make it right
your not sure of your feelings
yet it's him you dream of at night

go on take the chance
you've got nothing to loose
it could be romance
you wont know till you choose


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The following comments are for "the crush"
by littleone

i like
this is probably my favourite on of yours yet. I like how its very care free. nothing to lose? how about sleepless nights, hope, and the fact that knowin what there once was will never be agian.
anyway, i like it

( Posted by: VinceClarke241 [Member] On: November 22, 2004 )

u read my mind
hahaha this is exactly how i fell bout mattee so yah u can tell me later what i do and dont have 2 lose heheh i love u babe

( Posted by: tinibaby69 [Member] On: March 8, 2005 )

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