The following comments are for "Butterfly and Dragonfly" by peterpaulino
Demeter & Lucie
Demeter, thank you. Somehow I think the reason why it's jagged is that because I have forgotten to rearrange the stanzas: 2nd should be the third and the third 2nd. I'll do the revision if I'm sure there'll be no more comments on this piece. I appreciate you notice!
Lucie, haha! I thought of experimenting on the third stanza. You'll notice that if you'll just take away the 'flys' from butterfly and dragonfly the third stanza will make sense, I am happy that it's how you responded, you'll think I am naughty that I intended to give the readers a bit of a puzzle. Thank you for reading!