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Reservation of my soul
For my tribes, and for my seasons
Re-returning to the stone
Of remarkable ideas –
Here
Look at them again –
see the sky and group of clouds?
So high and distant, they
Never stop
(and being proud
I, as well, refuse to stop
where other recommended)
“Hey, catch up!” They call and so
here I swing by wind, by ending


------
Sua sponte,
O.


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The following comments are for "- clouds -"
by City

Clouds
This is Brilliant! It's the best thing I've read today.

( Posted by: A. Cain [Member] On: November 21, 2004 )

shy when landed
ladies, thank you very much
your comments men alot and I will try to keep up with the expectations

respect,
O.

( Posted by: City [Member] On: November 22, 2004 )





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