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O'er an etoile of streets
made for merchants,
a remnant of work
never realised,
the centerpiece with
missed table settings,
yet eyes eat here
marble, stone and gold.

Tongues of different
races, come to taste
part of an architects
vision, to produce a
city of spires, on an
Anglo-Venetian seam.

Domed like Florence
it could have stood,
but with tower and
turret, deaf to the
sounds of Citadel life,
this obelisk to one man
stands, the candelabra
to God and Christ.









------
Ask not what you can do to poetry, but what poetry can do to you.


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The following comments are for "St. Pauls Cathedral"
by londongrey

St. Pauls' Cathedral
I'm just commenting to let you know I read your work and admired it.

( Posted by: seanspacey [Member] On: November 19, 2004 )

Pen and Sean
Thanks guys!

Pen this is more about Sir Christopher Wren than St.Pauls, he dreamed of a London of spires, but did not manage to finish his work. Then thanks to WWII more of his work was wiped off the face of the earth. Such a shame he died before St.Pauls was finished.

Thanks Sean, I have seen you on the 'other' site, you keep cracking me up, sometimes I feel like screaming at some off the people on there, but, I'm enjoyign the learning.

Thank you

Alex :-)

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: November 19, 2004 )

St. Pauls
Thanks guys,

Good to see you Tina! Hope everything is okay.

Alex xx

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: November 22, 2004 )

Untitled comment
You are a talent! You used words to paint a picture comparable only to the works or Rembrant and Michaelangelo

( Posted by: DrBlack [Member] On: November 27, 2004 )

Yuley Grace

This is the most sophisticated and classy religious writing on Lit.

Happu holidayz,

Tefillin.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: December 13, 2004 )

You ARE a BEAUTIFUL mind
What an excellent read Alex.

Dar ;)

( Posted by: Dareva [Member] On: December 13, 2004 )

Everyone P.S. Demeter
Thank you everyone for commenting, where did all you guys come from!?! I'm always being attacked from the rear, hehehehehe!!

Thanks again.

Alex xx

P.S. Demeter, I'm not to sure about Dickens, probably reminds you of London as you imagine it in his time, which is an image I love.

( Posted by: londongrey [Member] On: December 14, 2004 )





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