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The gentle roar
another BMW
blasting down the street
itís quiet
no voices
to bring life to the concrete

Endless lights
forever streets
itís empty
and itís cold
silence grows
and grows

A few words
skitter across the grey stone
tremors in the frozen sky
nothing brilliant
nothing grand
laughter, back and forth

To tired to even sit
a gentle touch
and the night comes alive
and disappears
the perfect street
the frigid sky
the brilliant lights
melt away
an inner warmth
pervades my perception
and I rest my head
on yours and you
rest your head on me

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