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All you ever wanted was a little notoriety
But this cell phone doesn't work between your hills
You know those country boys want variety
Fast girls and pretty cars give them the chills

It looks like you're sufferin' from a little anxiety
You came a little fast in that last curve
You're hung up on the rungs of high society
You're gonna' hit the wall before you swerve

Those boys left you down and out in Antarctica
You act like they haven't ever done it before
There ain't no notoriety down in Antarctica
White trash blood ain't ever been nothin' but poor

You never had a problem with your sobriety
You never had any trouble with the pills
All I'm askin' for is a little piety
But Lord, you've got a fever for those thrills

Those boys left you down and out in Antarctica
You act like they haven't ever done it before
There ain't no notoriety down in Antarctica
White trash blood ain't ever been nothin' but poor


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The following comments are for "Left Out in Antarctica"
by williamhill

trashy
I like the song. Makes me think of Manson's "cake and s*d*my" song

( Posted by: thinspiration [Member] On: November 17, 2004 )

Manson
I don't listen to a lot of Manson. My daughter has a couple of songs. I would feel better if there were a country Manson. I like your stuff. thanks for readin'.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: November 17, 2004 )

References
This song has potential. The reference to Antarctica could use a little more "freezing cold" to the lyrics to help tie your title in better with the way you see this particular person in the song. The second line of the Chorus could probably use a lift, since it does nothing for the song.

A possible suggestion:

"Those boys left you down and out in Antarctica
You're stranded in the cold, just like before.
There ain't no notoriety down in Antarctica
It's just the tip of the iceberg, nothing more."

I hope this is helpful.



( Posted by: TheGadfly [Member] On: November 18, 2004 )





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