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Grandma's chicken soup
Hot, soft, with delicious smell
When will I eat it?

A/N: My 2nd haiku ever, I wrote this when I was ten. What did you think?

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The following comments are for "Chicken Soup"
by Furius

Warm, steaming soop
Thanks, it made me smile = .ak!plt.

( Posted by: ak7raplt [Member] On: May 1, 2002 )

lunch ^_^
strange to think i was having soup for lunch when reading this... inspires fond memories, and a nice 2nd ^_^ Ju =*_*=

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )

nice
It's excellent actually. perfect flow.

( Posted by: Seanspacey [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )

Soups up
This novice likes it and hopes you can find more like it.

( Posted by: chapter1 [Member] On: March 12, 2004 )





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