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Inevitable-
It comes and goes like the wind
Leaving quiet tears.


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The conscious shape reality.


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The following comments are for "Luck"
by Furius

and here i am...
wondering if my luck will hold and this afternoon at work will fly by much faster than this morning? Great haiku, echoing Jess (i'm doing that a lot aren't i?....sorry! :P) the one word 5 syllable is apt, and so strong in its self statement. Truly if i could describe luck with one other word, without using its name, it would be 'inevitable' More!! I'm insatiable for haiku at the moment! *bounces* Ju =*_*=

( Posted by: De`esse [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )

simply superb
Furius,
Random Reading is awonderous thing. I'm glad that I found this little stroke of inspiration. This haiku is excellent both in your word choice and the overall impact of the piece. Good job.

( Posted by: Bartleby [Member] On: January 3, 2003 )





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