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My Hypocrisy

Verse 1
I知 sorry my life has been a lie
I wish I hadn稚 hurt you
My guilt consumes me as I fall
To a place that I belong to

Chorus
I知 sorry I知 vapid
I知 sorry I知 shallow
I知 sorry that I知 a bitch

I wish I could love you
I wish I could be like
Somebody without this glitch

Verse 2
Self-righteousness, it was the cause
Pride and vanity played their hand
And I left you alone again
I didn稚 even take a stand

Chorus
I'm sorry I'm vapid
I'm sorry I'm shallow
I'm sorry that I'm a bitch

I wish I could love you
I wish I could be like
Somebody without this glitch

Bridge
And I
I didn稚 even try
And I
I took one look, and my head I shook
And then I said good bye

Chorus
I'm sorry I'm vapid
I'm sorry I'm shallow
I'm sorry that I'm a bitch

I wish I could love you
I wish I could be like
Somebody without this glitch
(Repeat)

Maybe by tomorrow I値l just forget


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I've been trying to change my avatar for four years...



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The following comments are for "My Hypocrisy"
by frenchie

frenchie! frenchie!
ah ha! lyrics from the almighty frenchie. wonderful to see. very good. you don't sound like a very nice lover. oh well, you are a good writer so its all good. i love "vapid". thats a good word.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: November 16, 2004 )

Almighty?
Well, I won't deny it....heh. JK. If only I could somehow get this song to Jack White...

Guilt is the theme of this song, because I definitely felt like a horrible person when I wrote it. I felt bad about putting the "B-word" in it, because I'm not in the habit of cursing in real life. I shouldn't do it in my writing either. But, I was acting like one, so it fits.

Thank you for your comment and compliments.

Amy

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: November 16, 2004 )





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