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Beating

Beating, the sacred rhythm of the eternal sound...
Beating, with each pulse instilling new life...
Beating; the beating heart, breath held tight…
Eyes closed, the gentle caress, the sinful trance.


~ I know this is very short but I have no desire to add anything to it. ~


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Give me a reason to love life
Prove to me happiness is real
Show me the undying light of hope
And I will cast away the darkness.



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