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"Have a Good Night My Dear"

I would love to tell you
To have fun on your night out
But i don't really want you to
I would love to tell you
To enjoy your time with him
But I don't really want you to
I would love tell you
That you better smile
But I don't really want you to
But I have to be at peace
Have to be the best of friends
And tell you to have a good night
While i'm....

Waiting for your call
Waiting for your call

But the phones not ringing

I would love to tell you
That he's nothing but a jerk
But I don't really know him
I would love to tell you
That he has no worth
But I don't really know him
I would love to tell you
That I'm so much better than him
But I don't really know him
But I have to be at peace
Have to be the best of friends
And tell you to have a good night
While I'm....

Waiting for your call
Waiting for your call

But the phone's not ringing

You have no idea
How many times
I've gotten up to make sure
That the phone was plugged in
No one take a call
I'll answer it
Just put it down
Just put me down

She's going to call
She's going to call

But the phone's not ringing

I would love to tell you
That I like how things are going
But that would be a lie
I would love to tell you
That I like riding in the back seat
But that would be a lie
I would love to tell you
That I am so in love with you
And it wouldn't be a lie (but i can't)
'Cause I have to be at peace
Have to be the best of friends
And tell you to have a good night
While I'm....

Waiting for your call
Waiting for your call


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jimmy g--do you see my heart? it is lying on the floor.


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The following comments are for "Have a Good Night My Dear"
by JimmyAndHisRocket

yup
this song has so much truth to it- we've all felt the exact feeling i'm sure that's described in this song..i really like it a lot because i can easily connect with it- good job, jimmy g

( Posted by: forlackofabettername [Member] On: November 13, 2004 )

hey thanks
thanks for the comment forlackofabettername. that is a very long screen name. i'm glad you could relate. its a hard life huh.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: November 13, 2004 )

very good
Hello Jimmy,

I really love this. I can see it as a song !!
to be able to put in coherent form the kind of feelings we hide to ourselves as in that sort of situation described is wonderful
=)

( Posted by: Lark [Member] On: November 16, 2004 )

AHHHHHH
I LOVE THIS!
I agree with Claire, it has awesome progression.
But i like the title you have now, i think it goes really well with the song.
I would love to tell you
That I like how things are going
But that would be a lie
I would love to tell you
That I like riding in the back seat
But that would be a lie
I would love to tell you
That I am so in love with you
And it wouldn't be a lie (but i can't)
I love the way you ended the piece especially, it gave me a twinge in the pit of my stomach, i'm not sure why.

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: November 17, 2004 )





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