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Like tantalising aroma
Of rich old wine.
Pricking her suppressed rage,
Finally ready to be indugled.

Ah~ Sweet revenge,
Like the taste of sweet wine.
Just for the temporary satisfaction,
She will hunt you down,
Watch you suffer
Her pain -
YOU caused,
Before it is time to perish.

How does it feel to be like her?
How does it feel
to have things come around at you?

Like watching a movie
For the very first time,
She will watch you cry,
Watch you bleed,
And for a chance, you will plead
Until you die.

Sizzling a like a poison potion,
Spreading like a deadly disease,
But when she finishes her glass
Of oh-so-sweet wine,
she will be all alone again.

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