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I'm here in this place,
in a daze,
with no face.

You all pass me by,
I'm not here,
you just lie.

I couldn't care less,
what you think,
world's a mess.

You know who i am,
so you think,
guess again.

I'm different from you,
you're all fake,
thats old news.

You know how i feel,
but you're wrong,
I'm for real.

I am who I am,
I won't change,
thats the end.

------
<<-Hillary->>


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The following comments are for ".Me Against The World."
by IamMEdontTRYtoCHANGEit

Excellent
Hillary - this great, rocking and snapping all the way.
Good job
Take care
Paul the Ogg

( Posted by: Ogg [Member] On: November 12, 2004 )





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