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She is

She is the sun.
She is the moon.
She is the clouds.
She is the sky.

I am the ground.
Unable to approach her.
Yet she can touch me,
so deeply with her sunshine rays.
And magical moonlight.
With her soaking rain like beautiful words.
Pouring down, possessing my heart.
She is my heart.

I am the ground.
Damp, solid, trodden
Dry and worn,
for eternity.
Yet i am still there,
staring into the sun.
The moon, the clouds,
and the sky,
trying to reach her
Becase she is my heart, my life.
To make me whole.
But knowing i will never
be able to achieve her.
I will never be whole.




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