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"It's been a lot since i entered the place of my eternity......
No one knows it,only i
This dark place,this dark dream!
This dark world,these dark thoughts!
This ugly face,this confusion!
It's so painful,how hard i endure it
I just don't know how to improve it
All i know is i have inherited it
and will go into grave with it."



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