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So many times, I tried expressing you that I love you,
So many times, I tried assuring you that I love you,
But, you neither believed me nor my love,
So many times I tried proving you that I love you !

I kept telling you time will fly,
I kept reminding you life is short
But, you never paid any heed to it,
And today you are sorry for all that you have lost

Life is once, live it to the fullest, I said
Value the ones who love you, I begged
You lost every today, worrying about tomorrow instead
And now you struggle to get back the years you shed

Perhaps now you feel you need me,
Perhaps now, that you really love me
But, it took a little longer for the feeling to be born
My love, I am sick today, tomorrow I will be dead and gone...


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