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In the silence of the nights,
I heard someone whisper
In my solitude, like a unknown presence
I have never seen, but, felt someone around,
Was that you .....Lord, was that you ?

When I felt low, my friends cheered me up
When I felt bad, always my mom called me up...
When I lost confidence, my victories occurred to mind
I wonder who did that all ?
Was that you....Lord, was that you ?

I say my prayers, and things look somewhat easy
Life appears so much better now, which a while back seemed so crazy...
I feel the strength, the magical ray of hope
Wonder who did that all ?
Was that you, Lord, was that you ?




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