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Verse:

You said you had it hard and worse off than me,
But the way I feel it its plain to see,
That there is no changing and its what's to be.

You said you'd be there, but what about him?
You leave him standing, just a wondering fool.
Well tell him something becasue you are setting the rules.

Chorus:

The time you said you'd leave to love his dreams,
Pack your bags right away, get up, move on and leave.
You give him those lies sealed with those kisses,
Girl to him you are just broken promises.

Verse2:

You followed him around just to make him smile,
All this was done just to please him awhile.
He knew the truth and saw right through you.

You really didnt like him, you just pretend to please,
Tell him girl why do you have to be such a tease??
Everytime you try to be nice, your jsut being more mean.

Chorus 2:

The time you said you'd leave to love his dreams,
Pack your bags right away, get up, move on and leave.
You give him those lies sealed with those kisses,
Girl to him you are just broken promises.

Bridge:

She is a walking image of a cheat,
Sneaking around, what a terrible way she treats.
Dont listen to liar, she will build you up to to through you away. . .

Final Chorus:

You "tried" to love his dreams and follow his lead,
When you were in front leading the way with your needs.
You gave him those lies sealed with those kisses,
Girl to him you are just broken promises,
Girl to me you have always been broken promises. . .



------
Norris & Bumpkins Inc.


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