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You know, itís strange to be here like this, to be actually looking down instead of looking up. An odd irony I guess since I used to be the one who used to look up to you, to smile at you and open my arms for a hug. You used to hug me as well, you used to make me feel so happy. Why did you stop making me feel happy though? Was it something I did wrong? You even stopped hugging me after a few years had passed, you made me feel so unloved.
Was I unloved though? Was I unwanted? You never did tell me, you never got the chance to. You used to be there for me, didnít you? What made you stop being there for me? Was it me? Was it something I did wrong? I wish you could have told me, I wish you would tell me right now. But you canít, you never will. Were you even upset when I left? You didnít even stay in contact, I wish you had stayed in contact, Iím sure you would be proud of me now.
Well I better get going now, I have a life to live and a family of my own to look after. Iím sure you would love my wife and my children, you never got to meet your grandchildren. I miss you mum, I miss you so much, you did love me and I loved you, still do oddly enough. I hope your at peace now mum, wherever you are. Goodbye mum, youíll always be in my heart, Iíll always be your little baby. Farewell.



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The following comments are for "Farewell, I'll never forget you."
by TrojanTony

Oh dear, a bit big
Emm, help, I submitted my World of our Making, but there's a problem, it's HUGE! I just tried to open it and it won't open, can I delete it and submit it in parts? The story kind of which out of control as more ideas formed, I have five minutes, so I'll quickly check if I can delete my story and I'll do so and re-submit tomorrow. Man, I really should learn to curb these ideas.

( Posted by: TrojanTony [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )

re: big
Done. I deleted it. It loaded for me (after a long wait). The database can handle it fine, it's just too big for html to display it! HTML just isn't the right medium for very large works. I'll consider putting up a section for PDF's.

( Posted by: Chrispian [Admin] On: May 2, 2002 )

Thanks
Thanks, I'll re-submit it in parts in a bit, I know the parts to do, it's a huge story and I am surprised how large the story is, anyway, thanks, I'll re-submit it in parts in four or so hours, bye.

( Posted by: TrojanTony [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )

REASONS FOR EVERYTHING
TROJAN/TONY, WHATEVER THE SITUATION WAS WITH YOUR MOM, I KNOW THAT IN HER OWN WAY, DEEP DOWN INSIDE SHE LOVED YOU VERY MUCH. I LOVED YOUR STORY, LOOK TO GOD FOR YOUR ANSWERS, AND TRUST ME, WHEN YOU FULLY TRUST GOD WITH ALL YOUR HEART, HE WILL GIVE YOU THE ANSWERS YOU NEED.

GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY,
JEANNIE

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: July 16, 2003 )





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