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Treasure

Somewhere deep inside me,
There's a cave,
where it snows so dense,
you can only see
so much before you.
Thunder and lightning
working in unison,
all the time.
Where there are castles and walls,
the king and queen and soldiers,
guarding this cave.
This treasure held inside.

Beautiful treasure.
But not paintings or necklaces,
not gold or silver or jewels,
for these we don't need.
These treasures are beyond cost,
illuminating, heavens treasure.
My light, keeping the fire,
inside me alit.
Memories of you.

They lay deep inside me,
where nothing can reach them.
Only me myself can see them
feel them, have them.
For eternity.

And I hope there will be more.


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