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Kindred spirits united
Moving across the span
To sate starving hearts
Hands touch, lips press

Moving across the span
Time affords us together
Hands touch, lips press
Hearts merge in loving bliss

Time affords us together
So many decadent pleasures
Hearts merge in loving bliss
With the rarest of intimacy

So many decadent pleasures
Touching, feeling, loving
With the rarest of intimacy
Souls unbending, blending

Touching, feeling, loving
To sate starving hearts
Souls unbending, blending
Kindred spirits united

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Signatures are lame. Oops!


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The following comments are for "A Pantoum for someone dear"
by Capulet

pantoum
Sounds like lyrics from a Journey song. good pantoum.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: November 7, 2004 )

pantoum
I don't know the rules of the pantoum, but you obviously do. this is beautiful!
Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: November 7, 2004 )





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