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Death, its so lonly,sad,and yet so powerful
it's horrible, yet it frees you from the pain.
It forces you to remember the past
but only so you can get over the pain.
it's inevitable,yet we are always trying to avoid it.
Death is the very meaning of life
you cant treat it or prevent it
when its your time it will happen
no matter how hard others try to stop it.
so i guess what im trying to say here is never be afraid of death, it's just another adventure on the road of life.


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by littleone

thanks.....its real nice that you think i have potential

( Posted by: littleone [Member] On: November 9, 2004 )

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