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Whenever Iím asked by a friend how Iím doin, I lie
And say to him that Iím fine though I ask myself why
There is no courage inside me to explain the truth
There is really nothing to laugh about when I choose
As a human being, no one has ever understood me
That my fear of isolation conquered my decency
As a result, my mind is as black as the night time
With no beautiful and magnificent stars to find
Let alone confined with painful memory and sorrow
Waitin for tomorrow filled with terror to swallow
My mind is deep below, it needs to find its way out
With someone who can guide me without their doubt
Thinkin that I must be lyin because I told no one
My deep secret has been hidden to my companion
Who might find my story interesting but doubtful
For this reason, everybody will look at me cruel
Time travelled long enough for the door to open
I wait and wait then pray for something to happen
No one can be seen nor any sound can be heard
But I felt so sad, unable to describe with a word
The sadness caused my blood to go up to the brain
It is urgin me to hold of the gun and end the pain
Once and for all, there is a very little reason to stay
Alone by myself feelin worthless every single day
I pull my trigger for the bullet to penetrate my head
Before I remember, my loved ones are already dead

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What am I to say?


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The following comments are for "Deadly Hatred"
by Hoax

Metaphor?
I'm sorry if I am too direct in this qustion but are they really dead? Or just emotionally? Sorry.

( Posted by: DrBlack [Member] On: November 28, 2004 )

simple answer
it's not a true story.....
everything's fictional

( Posted by: Hoax [Member] On: December 5, 2004 )





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