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I lost my spirit again
After I heard the laughter
From everyone in the room
I thought itíd be better
For me to be locked up
Inside my room forever.

It still is indescribable
How I feel from ridicules
I suffer every single day
I have my brain modules
That leaves me paranoid
Now I even hate myself
Mirror is what I avoid
Unless I would kill myself
In spite of the messages
And hopefully apologies.

No one leaves me alone
Even if all they do is taunt
Without understanding
What it feels like to be me
Is what they cannot gain
So I lost my spirit again.

No one is not capable
Of finding the peculiarity
I have in personality
Even I can find easily
I am particularly odd
Rather than charming
Just like human being
Thatís why I hate mirror
Illuminating myself
As a hideous creature.

What am I to say?

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