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This world made special for you and me
Has a special bond we cannot see
It wraps us up in it's cocoon
And holds us tightly to it's womb.
~
Threads like fine spun gold
Nestled deep within the fold
Like a spiders web it holds us fast
Bonds like these are meant to last.
~
And though at times a thread may break
A new silken one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
As Brother and Sister we belong.
~

------
len daniels


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The following comments are for "This World"
by crowhaven

"NICE"
Execlent write words flowed freely and such a wounderful message "crowhaven"

**DENNIS**



( Posted by: Lemmen [Member] On: November 5, 2004 )

crowhaven's world
Never let the web completely break. This flowed freely as Lemmen said, very easy to read. Nicely done.
Jim

( Posted by: Snapshot [Member] On: November 6, 2004 )





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