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poison
by stupidfreak (Member) - published: November 3, 2004
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Category - Poetry
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Your taste was addicting.
I couldn’t get enough.
Now I can’t find you.
It’s tearing me up.
This addiction I have for you



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by stupidfreak

short but powerful
Shawn, this short but powerful piece is well done and expresses an emotion which most can identify with. I'm trying to decide if it would be better without the last line....perhaps others can chime in on that issue...

Nice job.

claire

( Posted by: Clairesbest [Member] On: November 5, 2004 )





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