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know the future, but don't change it, because if you try, you might find yourself sleeping in the middle of an expressway; don't look smart, be efficient and wise, learn new languages in a small room at three am with black coffee and a blanket: and when you're done, learn some more then learn some humility 'cause you're too smart.

turn off the television, read a book, rinse twice and hold it for thirty seconds, spit; don't go to night clubs, they only make you feel lonely and hollow, and in the morning, you're not satisfied anyway, so stay up late and learn something new you've been wanting to know since new years after you finished throwing up: stop buying alcohol, it's a waste of your time and your money, the companies get richer from the clouds in your head, your judgement suffers and you sleep with someone from the bar who doesn't respect you after.

when you're a long way from home, buy a magazine.



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The following comments are for "wry rye"
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verve
How very true. I hate people who sleep with me and dont respect me.

( Posted by: praxidikai [Member] On: April 29, 2002 )

Learning new things...
Verve,

I must say that one again I fell into the flow of your writing. Plus I liked the message...*jumps up on her soapbox* "PEOPLE STOP WASTING YOUR LIVES, LEARN NEW THINGS" *gets off of the box*. Well, that is what I get from this piece perhaps I am wrong. No matter if I got the message right or wrong I still liked it.

Later,
Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: April 29, 2002 )





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