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Another World

Just to hear,


Sweet laughter ringing
and a heavenly voice singing,
carries unburdened joy
through my body.
Its touch, gentle and calm
like a sweeping breeze,
blowing me away into the air.
A bird, flying away into another world.
Where all happiness broods.
Roses, butterflys, rainbows, everything beautiful,
is the understated description of her voice.
And it describes who she is.

The pure voice, A magical world of its own,
Where sadness and pain does not exist
as long as her voice, herself, still breathes.
Where time is the only evil,
taking my wings away
and letting me fall
back into reality.

And i realise, time is always against us,
A shadow, you can never escape.
It never fades, it never stops,
to let us catch up,
or to let us savour a worthless moment.
I realise someday,
i will pass into the underworld.
But satisfied, hearing her voice.


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The following comments are for "Another world"
by namelessdragoon

Another World
Namelessdragoon;
I enjoyed this read tremendously...A very nice write...Especially the [2nd] stanza...

Thanks for sharing.....

Blessings,
{{{Jeannie}}}

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: November 4, 2004 )





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