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the earth spoke each time the wind whispered across it, sighing like a ghost under attrition at a midnight cocktail party without the cocktails; in the arctic land, praying between snowcapped trees in the dead forest, climb the raining mountain in a daily task of god: gather your gear and bring your boots, don't forget the sandwiches.

meanwhile, the urban godless search for a reason, shells of oyster innocence hollowed out for purity and pearls, but it's just a decadent delicacy in the street cafe; ethics under pressure, but keeping morality out of the uterus, and before the alien icicles invade, waiting for death like a passenger for a cab: in a dirty robe, the grey monk blue.



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The following comments are for "godless"
by verve

verve
Hey buddy, you know me and I really look deeply into things, but if I"m way off on this, perhaps you should concider a different strategy. It sounds to me like your having a little comparison between the believers and the frauds. Almost like, Romantics vs. Nihilists. Let me know.

( Posted by: praxidikai [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )

praxidikai
hey buddy. :P heh. um, you're sort of right.. i think i was trying to illustrate the difference between, say, eastern people and religion and north america.. with my own perspective thrown into the mix, i guess. :)

( Posted by: verve [Member] On: May 2, 2002 )





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