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Dime que me amas
No quiero ser
Si es mentira
Solo quiero oir
Las palabras

Mira me con amor
No quiero ser
Si es mentira
Solo quiero sentir
La emotion


Tell me you love me
I donít want to know
If itís a lie
I just want to hear
The words

Look at me with love
I donít want to know
If itís a lie
I just want to feel
The emotion )

"I like to think that the whole world is my friend"

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The following comments are for "No quiero ser"
by supergranny

No quiero ser
Sweet write, I enjoyed the spanish version best.
Good job, but I wish it were a little longer.


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: November 8, 2004 )

yo quiero mas
i found this quite enjoyable, but, alas, i too found it short.



( Posted by: kynde [Member] On: November 9, 2004 )

Swoon Swoon
I can't help it. It's language - it gets me every time. My brain swirls around every syllable. And if I have to try even harder to grasp it; all the better.

I love it written bilingually. It is beautiful both ways to me - a mainly English speaker. Knowing the definition makes the "foreign" sound so much more beautiful.

This is pretty to see, hear, read, and ponder.

Thanks, love!

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: November 9, 2004 )

I also found the Spanish version the most beautiful. Good job.

( Posted by: AngelChik [Member] On: November 9, 2004 )

I must be the only one here
who doesn't speak Spanish. Sigh. Be that as it may, I really liked this. Once again, you've said so much in just a few words. Sometimes you really don't want to now if it's a lie, you just want to hear it. My admiration for your writing just keeps growing. Cyn

( Posted by: Cyn [Member] On: November 10, 2004 )

thank you guys!
i am so glad for the positive feedback because i was a little afraid to post this, unsure of how people would respond to a poem in another language.. which is why i put the english translation at the bottom. thank you guys SO MUCH!

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: November 10, 2004 )

Love Ya Granny
I loved it...Other languages are so beautiful. I hope that one of these days I am inspired to write something in french.

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: November 10, 2004 )

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