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Do they think we exist in a shaded vale of innocence?
Sweet and small we play our games,
And will live happily ever after.
How ignorant they are!
We see and hear as well as they.
We know of their corruption.
We've accepted it.
We kill and die and fight as much as they.
The Real World has beaten down our doors;
Blinded us with Its garish light,
Sooner than they thought.
We are already here,
Already lost.

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The following comments are for "The Real World"
by frenchie

Real World
sad commentary- effectively stated.

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: November 4, 2004 )

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