Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
10

(1 votes)


RatingRated by
10supergranny

You must login to vote

Your words swirl about me
An infuriating cloud
I pick out a few here and there
And form our arguments again
Reliving the pain and indignation
Before falling into another fitful slumber
Dreaming of you and only wishing
You were dreaming of me too
I still want you for all the wrong reasons

------
I've been trying to change my avatar for four years...


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Want and lack thereof"
by frenchie

oh!
I really love this!
"Your words swirl about me
An infuriating cloud
I pick out a few here and there
And form our arguments again
Reliving the pain and indignation"
that is exactly how i remember arguments! i have to say it again, i love it!

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: November 3, 2004 )

yay
I'm glad you like it... This isn't one of my favorite poems...I'm glad to see someone else can appreciate it.

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: November 3, 2004 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: