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From whence have you come, jewel of Apollo?
What paths have you trodden?
Your ethereal beauty cannot be captured by word or paint or tune.
You are only as you are, purest light exemplified in your truest form.
I have sought after you as I would a lover,
seeking you to burn the ache in my soul and my shivering hands.
Upon finding you, you will grow dim and cold, as does my heart, until I seek you again.

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