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And I hate the fact that you stole my tear stained words and actions and claimed them for your own.
It must have been impossible for you, with your vast intellect to come up with something as genuine without invading what you chose to leave behind.
It disgusts me, how you feel compelled to show the world your greatness and importance.
All you could ever feel for anyone, including yourself is longing (for wrong choices you won't admit) and true ignorance.
Trivializing the enormity of our life over these days and diminishing yourself in the process.
How can you grow older and not see the devastation you bring to life with your words and your creation of emptiness?
Did not happiness once pass through your veins, pulsing with the brightness of the moon and the heat of the sun?
After all this time, you have become what you sought so long to avoid...unable to completely love someone.
Continue to erase all the memories of me as you wish, for you have become a husk of life in your desperation to be "free."
I breathe and I exist even now, you will not wipe me out and you will never take away the mirror behind your eyes that is me.

-- Stacey

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