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Penguin swims swiftly
Waddles across the cold earth
But he cannot fly

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I've been trying to change my avatar for four years...


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The following comments are for "Penguin"
by frenchie

aww
penguin! i love it! "waddle" is one of my favorite words!

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: October 31, 2004 )

cold
you know frenchie(i just love saying that screen name), for some reason i love the way you described the penguin's limits. "But he cannot fly"...love it.

jimmy g.

( Posted by: JimmyAndHisRocket [Member] On: October 31, 2004 )

many thanks
I truly appreciate your enthusiasm. My sn is what it is because je parle un peu de francais.

:)

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: October 31, 2004 )

Penguins!
Man, I looove penguins. They're just so darn cool. I'm sure this haiku would bring a tear to Mr. Popper's eye, just as it did to mine. Thank you for this truely inspiring work of penguiny art.

( Posted by: Spider [Member] On: October 31, 2004 )

Penguin Poetry
This reminds me of what I'd see as the epitaph of the penguin in Wallace & Grommitt's Wrong Trousers! Poor Penguin. So sinister. Perhaps if he could have flown things may have been different. I bet penguins around the world ( ? ) are rejoicing about finally having haiku written about them! Cool!

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: November 2, 2004 )





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