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Tree stands in the mist
Dark against the light of day
Solitary muse

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by frenchie

This haiku was based on a painting i did...

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: October 29, 2004 )

For me, a muse is anything I find inspiration in. It does not have to be a person or a spirit, but can be in the form of a seditary object. When I painted the tree all was still and quiet, there was no wind or sound....that is the image that will always be burned into my mind, so "sway" would not be an appropriate term in this case. I really appreciate your comment and rating though. Many thanks.

(Unfortunately the painting is no longer mine... I gave it to someone very special as a gift.)

( Posted by: frenchie [Member] On: October 30, 2004 )

really like
love the imagery in this! awesome!

( Posted by: supergranny [Member] On: October 31, 2004 )

Very great! How's that for a review? LOL I like when there is haiku that I can enjoy. This is good, has nature, and I don't hate it. Wow! Thanks!

( Posted by: GibsonGirl [Member] On: November 2, 2004 )

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