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My shining one

We are as one, my shining one.
My love, my life, my very one.
We were so close, we were a part of each other
My love, my life, my very one.
We are apart, my broken heart, my gone one.
Your death is one, my sorrow is all, my shining one, my shining dove.

I dream of me and thought

Gentle heart, gentle life.
Gifts of time are dreams now.
One of me, one of you.
I am for you, I am a wish.
I see only tears, why feel lonely since I am here?
I love you, my hearts true.
One of us, life's own day.
I love of many, I dream of many days.
This time is over, A gift from above.
Tears are all my words, I am this one now.
I am here.
Inside, lonely thoughts.
Dreams of many make me feel new.
I am only of a kiss.
One of us.
Truth beyond, truth without.
Only time will say of my own.
As we were, as we are.
Motions dreamed.
Soul within.
My only words are saying of a time soon.
I give of me now.
A wish has been told and I now move on.
I wish of you now, moving on now.
Without me.





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The following comments are for "My shining one and I dream of me and thought"
by TrojanTony

This is NOT a love poem!
Now if you all think this is a love poem to Dragoness, it isn't! It's actually my first ever poem and a song I wrote from a piece of music I have that is from a very emotional scene in a game. When I listen to music, like I am now, 85% of the time, a story, poem or song appears in me and I write it out. What I have above is evidence of that, so don't go thinking it's a love poem, it isn't, I've written a few love poems, but as all of you seem to hate me and Dragoness being in love, than I won't submit them here. There, explained, geez I'm so tired of this now, why explain when you should be able to understand? Bye.

( Posted by: TrojanTony [Member] On: May 1, 2002 )





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