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I was given a wonderful gift
Sent from Heaven above
My spirits lifted, my soul awake
More powerful than I could imagine.

I felt like my heart could be broken
Tears overflowing deep inside
Flooded with so many emotions
Intertwine with every nerve in flight.

I hope to remember this moment
That made me feel this way
Giving me the wisdom, to share,to grow, &
Comprehend the pureness of innocence.

This Angel on loan from far above
How I admire her beauty, joy, and grace
You know there is music in my heart
From her friendship restoring my faith.

Having your friendship as my gift
Has given my life a greater lift
Here to help me through the day
The list so long as the milky way.

The many ways you support me
Shows me how deeply you care
Your devotion to hold this friendship
Is greater than the love we share.

When we replace the distance
And you and I stand side by side
I am overwhelmed with happiness
Knowing that God sent you here.

len daniels

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