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"I wanna go home"
A lost child cries
Nothing unusual there
Except she's sitting in her room
Home isn't where I'm sitting, she says
Not this empty house
Home isn't a place
It's a feeling of being
warm
safe
happy
Like no matter what, Home will shelter you from reality
And it's safe
and warm
Until "reality" comes crashing through your front door.
And your house isn't safe anymore
And now a girl sits in her room
and cries
and whispers to the forsaking skies
"I wanna go home."

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Heaven doesn't want me and Hell's afraid I'll take over.


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by SWHCgirl

Reminds
This peice reminds me just how much i've missed your work lately. I really like your writing. It remins me of what i'd write like if i wrote poetry instead of lyrics. Please, PLEASE keep up the good work.

( Posted by: E.G. Evans [Member] On: April 25, 2002 )

It's nice.
I liked ur work. I have read most of ur recent works and i am eager to read ur latest works. Especially ur poems.This one was really very nice.I wish u all the best for ur future works and hope to read more.

( Posted by: g.s.vasukumar [Member] On: April 29, 2002 )

poem HOME
I am looking for author of a favorite poem of my mothers, which went like so ( Home isn't a place that gold can buy or get up in a minute, Home is a place with a heap of living in it, etc ) any help would be apreciated, thanks

( Posted by: billrhart27 [Member] On: June 26, 2004 )





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