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During the day,
I'm okay.
I laugh and smile and play.
I never shed a tear,
In front of all of you,
That's something I couldn't do.

When I get home at night,
I cry with fright,
I cry with the fear of waking up,
I cry with the fear of messing up,
And as I wish upon a star,
I dream of a better life,
I wish of another's life.


If they knew of the pain
I hid away.
People see my beautiful blond hair,
And they see my skin, ever so fair,
And they see my pools of blue,
Oh but if they only knew.
Then they would undoutly see,
That my laughter is a play.


I keep secrets from friends.
I hid the truth,
Oh will this intense pain ever mend?
Will i feel much happiness again?
Will i tell the truth to my friends?
Or will thgis pain keep hidding?
And slowly kill me inside?
Will I continue to hid?



During the day,
I laugh, I play,
I would never cry
And let you all see,
What's deep inside me.
What's deep deep inside me.


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The following comments are for "Smile and Play"
by kimmysings17

kimmysings17, Nice lyrics you got here. They flow nicely and have a feel of belonging together. There was one rather distracting spelling error in verse three, I figured out what you meant but it did interupted the flow. I wish could say more but as I have said before, I hate talking about lyrics because I do not feel as if I can get the full meaning of them without hearing the music that goes with them. Later, Dras

( Posted by: Drastine [Member] On: April 30, 2002 )

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